[Internal-cg] Part 0 v2

Alissa Cooper alissa at cooperw.in
Fri Oct 9 18:46:17 UTC 2015

Hi Paul,

Thanks. I have some questions and comments on some of your edits.

Footnote 14: seeing as the numbers proposal and the other two proposals are included verbatim in the document, I think it’s confusing to cite the version hosted at nro.net <http://nro.net/>. We do not have similar footnotes for the other two proposals. So I’d prefer to leave this out.

Para 13: I think the point about coordination is a good addition, but I’m not sure it belongs in the summary of the proposal. I’d like to move it down into the interoperability section. 


> On Oct 8, 2015, at 6:44 PM, Paul Wilson <pwilson at apnic.net> wrote:
> Agree with Jari - I think the text is in good shape.
> All the same I’ve added a few small refinements to the numbers community parts. I’ve also added a bunch of new footnotes, on an assumption of “the more the better”.
> My edits are in the dropbox here:
> https://www.dropbox.com/s/vw88kaarzni31q8/transition-proposal-part0-v2-formatted-pw.docx?dl=0
> Paul.
> On 9 Oct 2015, at 8:26, Alissa Cooper wrote:
>> Thanks. I know we did not get to discuss Part 0 on the call today, but I’ve been assuming folks are mostly fine with the text given that it’s been circulated on the list for awhile and I haven’t seen many comments. I will incorporate the actions from today’s call and circulate a complete redline in advance of people traveling to Dublin.
>> Alissa
>>> On Oct 8, 2015, at 12:47 PM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko at piuha.net> wrote:
>>> For what it is worth, my first read of this indicates that the text is
>>> in good shape; I didn’t have any specific suggestions at this stage.
>>> Overall, there might be a thing or two to lift up from part 0 to
>>> the executive summary once we are done. (E.g.,the part about
>>> dependencies to CCWG work.) I also wonder if this is something
>>> that should lead to writing the “E. ICG Recommendation” text
>>> slightly differently.
>>> Jari
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