[Internal-cg] Part 0 v2
pwilson at apnic.net
Sat Oct 10 02:12:26 UTC 2015
All good for me, thanks Alissa.
On 10 Oct 2015, at 4:46, Alissa Cooper wrote:
> Hi Paul,
> Thanks. I have some questions and comments on some of your edits.
> Footnote 14: seeing as the numbers proposal and the other two
> proposals are included verbatim in the document, I think it’s
> confusing to cite the version hosted at nro.net <http://nro.net/>. We
> do not have similar footnotes for the other two proposals. So I’d
> prefer to leave this out.
> Para 13: I think the point about coordination is a good addition, but
> I’m not sure it belongs in the summary of the proposal. I’d like
> to move it down into the interoperability section.
>> On Oct 8, 2015, at 6:44 PM, Paul Wilson <pwilson at apnic.net> wrote:
>> Agree with Jari - I think the text is in good shape.
>> All the same I’ve added a few small refinements to the numbers
>> community parts. I’ve also added a bunch of new footnotes, on an
>> assumption of “the more the better”.
>> My edits are in the dropbox here:
>> On 9 Oct 2015, at 8:26, Alissa Cooper wrote:
>>> Thanks. I know we did not get to discuss Part 0 on the call today,
>>> but I’ve been assuming folks are mostly fine with the text given
>>> that it’s been circulated on the list for awhile and I haven’t
>>> seen many comments. I will incorporate the actions from today’s
>>> call and circulate a complete redline in advance of people traveling
>>> to Dublin.
>>>> On Oct 8, 2015, at 12:47 PM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko at piuha.net>
>>>> For what it is worth, my first read of this indicates that the text
>>>> in good shape; I didn’t have any specific suggestions at this
>>>> Overall, there might be a thing or two to lift up from part 0 to
>>>> the executive summary once we are done. (E.g.,the part about
>>>> dependencies to CCWG work.) I also wonder if this is something
>>>> that should lead to writing the “E. ICG Recommendation” text
>>>> slightly differently.
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